Bitter Red Irony

The below story is just a quick one I wrote a while ago and I've decided to offer it as a sacrifice to you all. 3.00 Darkness wraps itself around ...

the concept is really amazing, and you write dialogue very well. the dialouge is the highlight of your peice, that and your somewhat abstract ideas. your descpritions of what happen's ...

i really quite liked this story. it was a very appropriate length, descriptive and character explanitory peices like this one, i feel, should always be of a shorter length, otherwise ...

well, obviously, i am a noobie. i've writen mostly fanfiction *blushes* because of the easy accesibility of it and well its an easy way to get good criticism and ego ...